by Shinobi
I really liked the way you wrote this piece. The flow was great all the way, although there weren't much rhymes. The idea stood strong with the repetance of "I still love you". Enjoyed reading it and probably would write a poem about a similar subject. Thanks for being a source of inspiration 5/5 |
Awe. a poem written so sweet and beautiful. |
Beautiful, great story line, short and sweet and obviously straight to the point. I adored this and enjoyed the read well done!!!! 5/5 |
by ABake
A cute tribute. I think that the emotion and love is pure. With the poem, the flow was off a bit. But still beautiful. I was kinda confused about the star stuff it kind of makes you not want to read the poem. Lol. Also you put question marks where I didn't think it was a question. Other than that great short peice. |
by TracyM
Wow, I like the way you've written this poem, the emotion is strong, and really was beautifully writen, and a most enjoyable read. Keep it up. |
Wow, this is very enjoyable read poem... |
by Blissful
I liked this one! The repitition in this case worked! It made the message clear and powerful. I could relate with most of it which made it a joy to read. Well done *5/5* |
Aw, this is such a cute poem. Sounds like my poems, but it's still great. Good job! |
by HidinVictim
Umm, not one your best but still pretty cute, you can definatly tell that there is alot of emotion behind this poem.. 5/5 |
I like it a lot, it holds so many emotions. I like the repetition, it is effective and it creates great flow through the whole poem. Very vivid piece, filled with heartfelt feelings and sincerity. |
by Dave
Wow you can really feel the emotion you put in to this great job and an exclent poem thanks |
No matter what, love is love, and when you love someone, it never ends. |
by jLegendc
Hehe i like this poem although it's too simple and it didn't have a flow bcoz of this stanza: |
by RobinAnn13
Awww. This was one sad AND sweet. It's hard to accomplish that. I liked the repeating line "I still love you.." it says so much by itself. This is a very powerful poem. 5/5 |
by Michelle18
This is really good...the repeatition was good and i like the message behind it. ..you did a great job with this one. |
by Sumit Ojha
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by Dave
Very beautiful truly heartfelt over brimming with emotion |