My Fairytale

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Dec 29, 2007


My fairytale does not exist, and I feel so dead inside
I use to live my life, without the need to have to hide
As a little girl, I dreamt of only magic
But who knew my life would turn so tragic.

All the things in place, and everything was set
I never thought that I'd ever have regrets
I thought he was the one; my heart would skip a beat
Whenever he was near, I'd simply feel complete

It was just the beginning of my fairytale story
I thought I found someone, who'd completely adore me
From strangers to best friends, and infatuations grew
Though not with me, I watched him fall in love with someone too

The story should've gone in order, from beginning to the end
But I didn't get my fairytale, the one I'd once imagined
With him I shared my feelings, in hopes that he would see
In hopes that he would understand, and maybe fall in love with me

But to my despair, a friendship. .or less was his desire
This news was unbearable, and it set my heart on fire
I spoke of how I cared, I laid it out flat
But somehow in the end, he just didn't love me back

© 2007 WilTED.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this is really really beautiful yet sad. i loved every word. a great beginning and a great ending. excellent job at expressing yourself. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Quietly Versed

    The AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH rhyme pattern was softly hidden and unpredictable. This is good. I hate to read a poem that i can guess the next rhyming word. The part "the story should have gone in order from beginning to end" seems to me that the speaker is stating that the beginning was the end, and that, while still a story with a front and back but no content in between.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    Wow i simply adored this poem.A tragic tale of how a princess never gets her prince.Thats how i thought of it.Beautiful rhyming. I liked it.And what a devastating ending to what i imagined should have been ended with a kiss.True loves sweet kiss.
    THen again some of us never get our happily ever afters...
    ~Jo Anna EL

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    Wow i simply adored this poem.A tragic tale of how a princess never gets her prince.Thats how i thought of it.Beautiful rhyming. I liked it.And what a devastating ending to what i imagined should have been ended with a kiss.True loves sweet kiss.
    THen again some of us never get our happily ever afters...
    ~Jo Anna EL

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    I simply adored this piece!It relates to everyone so well and you can feel the emotion and expression.A tragic ending especially to what should have been a happy little fairytale that ends with a kiss.
    But then again some of us never get to the happily ever after part....

    ~Jo Anna EL

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