This was such an awesome poem. It's sensitive, yet powerful. The flow was just amazing and the imagery was great. Good job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

I liked how you did the ending of the poem.

I liked it very much so.

The flow was good and you used sorta plain words but don't we all? I do, I know that for sure. lol.

I did enjoy reading it. 5/5

Aww that was so sweet.
It made me cry!
Your really good!
xoxo

5/5!! :]

Wow, this is ... amazing, i fell like your reading my heart in a book, perfectly written... you are such an amazing writter...5/5

Aww =( i love this poem.. its soo cute but sad but AWW lol i like it a lot.. really the flow is FLAWLESS And the way uou set up the poem with the whole fairytale story is a nice idea... good work :]

GFGJASLD.
I love this.
Like, completely.
There's not a thing wrong with it.

5/5

"..From strangers to best friends, and infatuations grew
Though not with me, I saw him fall in love with someone too .."

thats just a few lines from a superb write that i just read.. AMAZING..
A very sad write, indeed
flow was some .. but alltogether..
great
Keep it coming

~Wake~

Wow. Impressive and heartfelt. The ending was perfectly timed, and the last two lines were excellently scribed. What a poem! By far the best of yours ive read so far. I can really feel the sorrow and pain, I'm stunned! Again, the structure was slightly flawed with mismatched syllables and random (it seemed) lines. Perhaps it was designed to be, to capture the brokenness of a heart...
Truly excellent poem.

Sole. x

Eep, its wriiten so amazingly. I love the detail and the faint rhyme scheme. Its so good.
{5/5}
[PygmyPuff]

The begaing is very rocky but you pulled it together nicely. beautiful write
thank you for you comments
5/5
(~:Sam Mayo:~)

Awww!This poem is so sad.*tear*I love it though.

"My fairytale is nonexistent, and I feel so dead inside
I use to live my life, without the need to have to hide
As a little girl, I dreamt of only magic
But who knew my life would turn so tragic."

My favorite stanza...5/5 ^_^

<3Amber

Great poem, just one question.
Is it a fairytale, or a part of your life?
Either way well writen.

Wow. Now this is something I could relate with my whole heart. You described the beginning and end of your fairytale beautifully and I could follow easily. Sometimes we feel as we have found "the one" the magical feeling everything talks about but sometimes we are decieved and you described that flawlessly.

"With him I shared my feelings, in hopes that he would see
In hopes that he would understand, and maybe fall in love with me "
^I think the use of "hope" in this stanza two times threw off the flow for me and this was the only place where I felt the flow was off.

Other then that, this poem was flawless. Well done *5/5*

Omg!! this is excelent! no wonder you have a gazzilion votes and comments on this!! i can competely relate to this! you are an amazing writer and im adding you to my favorite authors list! really really really great! words can even describe it! i cant wait to read more! keep it up!! =]

Aww this is so sad but so well written. I love the use of rhyme.

With him I shared my feelings, in hopes that he would see
In hopes that he would understand, and maybe fall in love with me

My favourite lines, I also love the ending. The way the title is opposite to the way the poem ends is very clever.

5/5

Em xXx

Wow...this is an amazing poem...it truely is..

i enjoyed reading every line..from beginning to end it was flawless... flow was great ... just absolutely amazing.another 5/5 from me.

Aww I can feel your emotions in this poem. I can somewhat relate in it so I know that it really hurts.

Anyway I like the way you rhymed some lines, well done. The flow was flawless and the story was superb.

5/5!

I realy love the part when you say:All the things in place, everything was set
I never thought that I would ever have regrets
I thought he was the one, for my heart would skip a beat
Whenever he was near, I'd simply feel complete
good jop

I think this was the best poem ive seen you write and that line that hit me like ive been here beofre and everything "I spoke of how I cared, I laid it out flat
But somehow in the end, he just didn't love me back"
except for the it she that didnt but that besides the point, great kepp it up-
raindrops 5/5