This skillfully written poem does describe, in depth, dark feelings I am familiar with. The content of this empty theme seems to increase, in me, the desire to fill my empty spaces 5/5

The ending was really good. Very nicely flowed. But, the rest of the poem was a bit rocky.. The rhyming was kinda.. all over the place & not so well ;/

It needs work; but was pretty good. I portrayed a lot of confusion & dark feelings. I liked it, overall!

I loved the ending, and I think the rest of the poem only made it that much better. I like this poem, a lot.
Good job, amazing job, kee it up, whoot
-Krystal.