Sorry friend

by Scarlet Angel   Dec 29, 2007


Dear, friend I'm sorry
For what I've done
I know that death
has finally won

This lifelong battle
That I've fought
has been decided
I have lost

I'm sorry dear,
I really tried
But from deaths gaze,
None can hide

So here i lie
Under bloody skies
Red tears falling
From unseen eyes

Remember who i used to be
Before death got a hold on me

Use my story, to save your friends
Before they too meet a bloody end.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    OMG! this was extremely good. I felt grabbed by the powerful words. Another wonderful poem. keep it up. 5/5
    kat

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    This has a lot of power wen the right people read it.. :)
    loved it.
    5/5
    plz return the favor

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Such power behind the words. Exquisite! I love it! <3
    5/5

    ~Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX

    That is fantastic sad but good structure

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow, this is good, but u know i'd die if u died, reme. i luv u, but this is really good

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