Pain [Etheree]

by Nina Star   Dec 29, 2007


Death.
Lingers.
Without fail.
Sadness enters.
To lengthen the tale.
Tearful eyes side by side.
The body battered and bruised.
Just as bad as the mourners hearts.
Who could have committed such a crime.
To their only beautiful valentine.

AN: I know it's terrible, it was my first attempt at an etheree.

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  • 16 years ago

    by YoursTruly

    'Tis was not terrible if that makes sense =D.
    It's really good.
    Sad, though.
    How'd you get all the right syllables in the right order and stuff, it's hard =S.
    Etheree!
    I learnt a new word (Y).
    <3.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    It wasn't terrible. It's better than i poem i had to write in 8th grade. Some diamond poem. Yeah that sucked lol. But this is great.
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    Oh wow.
    totes cool
    upsetting but well done

    very good babes.
    glad u succeded.

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