Hiden frowns

by MeltInHisArms   Dec 29, 2007


Hidden frowns behind painted on smiles,
silent tears that go on for miles.
Broken hearts full of fears,
cries for help that no one hears.
People need to stop assuming every things great,
they need to see the truth before it's to late.
When the world seems so unfair,
it helps to know that someone's there.
But people are always caught up in their own lives,
that they don't notice who makes friends with a knife.
It's always the people you least expect to be sad,
but people don't care and that's to bad.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Confessions

    But people are always caught up in their own lives,
    that they don't notice who makes friends with a knife.
    It's always the people you least expect to be sad,
    but people don't care and that's to bad

    Loved it!! :) :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Great metaphores, i like it much ,
    i will read more and comment it seem you have much talent here
    !!
    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by TAYLOR

    Nice poem :)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Loved the emotion in this piece!

    Keep up the good work!

    Danielle
    xx
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by desiree

    Wow.
    So true.
    People are too busy, too see those who are in pain...

    5/5
    Nice job

Read All Comments (13)

More Poems By MeltInHisArms