Angel Of My Night

This is a good poem..i liked it..theres only one thing that wasnt right...it kinda seemed like you were talking in past tense but then changed to present tense..it made it a little hard to concentrate on the poem..overall its still pretty good.4/5.

I loved the rhyming here! Everything just flowed together flawless and I was hooked from beginning to end. The words you used to described you emotions were flawless and I just enjoyed the poem from beginning to end. Well done *5/5*

It is still the same style but yo i don't care.. i really like this one.. girls r always describe by guys as "angels" and i always do that too.. a very sweet poem.. again.. it's heart-melting.. i don't want any of my frnds(girls) to read your poem coz they might fall for you.. lol.. seriously.. they love poems especially this kinds =] nice one !

Another well written poem, although it did feel at times the rhyming felt a little forced. But the flow was good and the whole poem itself had great meaning and emotion it was truly beautiful. Well done.

This poem really caught my eye because it was kind of like my style of righting. But you are more talented at it then me.

Your flow was almost if not perfect, and the way you describe your "Angel" was beautiful.

My favorite part however was:

"She's the only one who could treasure all my best
I was down on luck, but she won't ever love me less"

That really put a smile on my face.

Good Job

^Men^