by fera86
What a sweet poem!!! 5/5!!! |
by Not
I love this poem to its so sweet my fave part is |
by Christina
Awwwz another great poem.....i liiked it......it was very cute!!! keep it up!!! 5/5 |
Wow, this was such a beautiful poem. |
by Men
This poem really caught my eye because it was kind of like my style of righting. But you are more talented at it then me. |
Another well written poem, although it did feel at times the rhyming felt a little forced. But the flow was good and the whole poem itself had great meaning and emotion it was truly beautiful. Well done. |
by jLegendc
It is still the same style but yo i don't care.. i really like this one.. girls r always describe by guys as "angels" and i always do that too.. a very sweet poem.. again.. it's heart-melting.. i don't want any of my frnds(girls) to read your poem coz they might fall for you.. lol.. seriously.. they love poems especially this kinds =] nice one ! |
by Blissful
I loved the rhyming here! Everything just flowed together flawless and I was hooked from beginning to end. The words you used to described you emotions were flawless and I just enjoyed the poem from beginning to end. Well done *5/5* |
by Michelle18
This is a good poem..i liked it..theres only one thing that wasnt right...it kinda seemed like you were talking in past tense but then changed to present tense..it made it a little hard to concentrate on the poem..overall its still pretty good.4/5. |