Comments : Angel Of My Night

  • 16 years ago

    by fera86

    What a sweet poem!!! 5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I love this poem to its so sweet my fave part is
    "Angel of my night, with the heart of gold
    Came to my soul, when my days turn so cold"thats so sweet aww...!!...=) love always!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz another great poem.....i liiked it......it was very cute!!! keep it up!!! 5/5

    <3 i love you silly

  • Wow, this was such a beautiful poem.
    I love the words you used to express this feeling.

    "Angel of my night, she's the most shining light
    I believe that nobody will match her bright sight
    When it's wrong, she's the one to make it right
    When I was lost, she told me the way to decide"

    ^This was my fav stanza from the whole poem.
    Great job!
    5/5

    *Cindy*

  • 16 years ago

    by Men

    This poem really caught my eye because it was kind of like my style of righting. But you are more talented at it then me.

    Your flow was almost if not perfect, and the way you describe your "Angel" was beautiful.

    My favorite part however was:

    "She's the only one who could treasure all my best
    I was down on luck, but she won't ever love me less"

    That really put a smile on my face.

    Good Job

    ^Men^

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Another well written poem, although it did feel at times the rhyming felt a little forced. But the flow was good and the whole poem itself had great meaning and emotion it was truly beautiful. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    It is still the same style but yo i don't care.. i really like this one.. girls r always describe by guys as "angels" and i always do that too.. a very sweet poem.. again.. it's heart-melting.. i don't want any of my frnds(girls) to read your poem coz they might fall for you.. lol.. seriously.. they love poems especially this kinds =] nice one !

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the rhyming here! Everything just flowed together flawless and I was hooked from beginning to end. The words you used to described you emotions were flawless and I just enjoyed the poem from beginning to end. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a good poem..i liked it..theres only one thing that wasnt right...it kinda seemed like you were talking in past tense but then changed to present tense..it made it a little hard to concentrate on the poem..overall its still pretty good.4/5.