Lol funny poem.....lol all tho i didnt rele see the point of the poem....lol maye thats just hte funny part idk! but another good poem! keep it up!

<3 i love you silly

This was just great. I love the way you put different type of cakes and drinks. Great job! 5/5

*Cindy*

Funny little poem, very entertaining...

I thought it was a pretty good poem, the rhyming seem REALLY forced in some parts, maybe all but two lines, the flow was good, and the all around idea of the poem was great, sorry, but i think this one deserved 4/5

Stephanie Naylor

Hmmmmmmmmm.
I am so hungry nowwww. I don't think
I should read your food poems anymore
Lol. Well done :)
5/5
<3tay