by FridusBlueheaven Dec 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Title : Bucket Of Flowers |
by chicago
Whats up man i really like it so keep it up |
by Michelle18
Wonderful poem...beautifully written and completely flawless... i loved it... its interesting how you took such simple words and made them stand out... great job.5/5 |
by JustKristina
I like this poem, a lot. I love the way you used the flower's in this piece. It is so deep and heart-felt, im sure that anyone can take this and turn in into something that they can relate to, i know that i can. I know that you were trying to rhyme every line, but sometimes i think that it just didn't work. But it is a very hard thing to do, and i think that its okay.. just not to its full potential. Keep it up! :] |
by Nelle
This is amazing. I've never seen one like this either, and you wrote it very uniquely. It has a great idea behind it. |
Aw this is such a sweet and beautiful poem |