Fall to pieces

Frustrated because I can't tell if it's real.
Please tell me this wasn't all a game.
Mad because I don't know how you feel.
I don't want to put out this flame.

Its like being stuck in a web of love.
I have this quote on my page
"Why is it that someone can shatter your heart and you still love them with all the little pieces"
^^thats very true love does a funny thing to us all, don't you agree?
Your objectives were strong like always. Great job. To me you are now known as a "strength writer" If you're not talking about being strong in actions, you are using strong emotions.
5/5
laura

Very good poem. I could feel the emotions as I read it. The wording was good and so was the flow. I gave it a 5/5.

"Frustrated because I cant tell if its real"
> "cant" should be "can't"
"i can feel my heart of glass begining to crack"
>"begining" should be "beginning"
"Just tell me now, am i waisting my time?
Curious, is this just one of those twisted faits?"
> "waisting" should be "wasting"
> "faits" should be "fates"
"Baby face it its not just the distance"
> "its" should be "it's"

There are a few places where you need to capitalize your "I"'s.

Other than those mistakes, you're all good. Nice write.
*Chaotic Angel*

Omg, I thought this poem was so freakin great & we loved it very much. Keep up the good work (5/5)

Bleak without my other half
please just come back
Worried never again will i hear you laugh
i can feel my heart of glass begining to crack

^^^^When you are able to say that: please just come back, then you know it is real love.
If it wasn't you would not think twice about a man who has already kissed another girl.
Very good poem, you have put into words very well how you feel about this:)

Take care!

Ingrid 5/5