Nicely worded piece.
and also captures emotion very well.
a great poem and i can relate.
an attention grabbing poem from start to finish. :]

i loved the first stanza. 5/5.

Wow, I love this poem, its beautifully written and flows really well, it was a pleasure to read, keep it up!

I love your wordage...
This poem is kinda emotional...
Well done job...
It's 5/5

Wonderful job
you kept me intrigued from beginning to end
the first stanza for me was easy to relate to
the last stanza was good
except the last line sort of messed up the flow
that's an easy fix though
The sixth stanza was my favorite
because it really relates to what I'm feeling now
you did a good job
nice write
5/5
Kaila