Comments : Corroding my cheek

  • 16 years ago

    by sing to me baby

    Wow!
    its amazing!
    i can relate to it so well

    keep up the good work

    -xx-

  • 16 years ago

    by nando

    That was like a drink of water on a hot summers day.
    no... it was richer than that.
    maybe more like warm amber rum in the dead of winter.
    thank you.

    if you need to talk im always here. yeah.

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jessy

    That poem is well 'mazing! I love it! It even bought tears to my eyes. Keep writing, your amazing. Check out my poems if ya can.

    Loves x