My God what descriptive passion, what truth dressed in such utter grandeur! You r an amazing poet, i wish i could get wer u are. but, as we true poets know, a true poet writes for his heart..but very GOOD job man! keep it up! your really blessed by God in Heaven, He has truly given u real talent.

Well done, great description for the girl, wonderful indeed! 5/5

I love it. it is so sad what some women put theirselves threw like you said... it is horrible and you porttry their pain so reastically. i love all of your work you are and amazing writer.