Your Hand Says All I Need To Feel...

by ABake   Dec 30, 2007


Your looking into my eyes, but it feels as if your looking into my heart...
Automatically the alarm sounds and all locks, bolts, and chains are tightly fastened;
I look away, with a giggly tone I say the moon is bright tonight,
What I really mean is, don't look at me that way my heart can't handle it-

Trust me, I have been down this road a million times before,
It is just not that easy for me to let me guard down, after all he did hurt me;
I am not asking you to understand me, just be here to listen, you never know-
You may be the holder of the key to this [sacred] heart of mine...

I count every step you take as you walk up to my heart; You knock,
My heart is beating wildly as it opens up for you, this is just a trial run-
Tell me now: Are you feeling what I am feeling or is it time to run?
Maybe, just maybe I won't disconnect my heart this time...

I think this just might work, please be honest and tell me if I'm wrong,
The look in your eyes and your hand in mine say all I need to feel;
No more keeping up my wall, it is time to let it down you allow you in-
But just because you are in now doesn't mean it will stay this way...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved it! The first line just captured me and I was hooked from then to the end. The second to last stanza was just beautiful. I loved the imagery and you took such a overused topic and made it your own which was amazing. Beautiful poem you penned here dear. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    This is a very lovely poem i really liked it alot.
    i noticed you spelt the word scared wrong in your poem then there was another line before that

    "It is just not that easy for me to let me guard down"

    should be
    "It is just not that easy for me to let my guard down"
    not to let me guard down :D

    other then that great job.
    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Another great poem....and i could feel the emotion in it.......it also had great flow to it!!! keep it up!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    The message of this poem was great and its seems there are some few words that it was really sweet and very interesting,, but though its a bit off and hope u can make better.. 4/7