by ABake Dec 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Your looking into my eyes, but it feels as if your looking into my heart... |
by Blissful
I loved it! The first line just captured me and I was hooked from then to the end. The second to last stanza was just beautiful. I loved the imagery and you took such a overused topic and made it your own which was amazing. Beautiful poem you penned here dear. *5/5* |
by kate
This is a very lovely poem i really liked it alot. |
by Christina
Another great poem....and i could feel the emotion in it.......it also had great flow to it!!! keep it up! |
by Sweet lig
The message of this poem was great and its seems there are some few words that it was really sweet and very interesting,, but though its a bit off and hope u can make better.. 4/7 |