CRY

by Nicole   Dec 30, 2007


Cry
shed a tear...or maybe ten...
show your pain...you sadness...
show the world you need someone
because all whom you love have abandoned you at a critical time.

reveal you loneliness...with your tears
reveal the past amongst the pain
reveal your betrayal that love gave you

cry until someone holds out their hand
willing to wipe away your tears
willing to bring out your smile no matter the cost

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Great poem. Full with tears, emotion and saddness. Enjoyable peace to read, 5/5.

    I love this stanza, as well the others.

    reveal you loneliness...with your tears
    reveal the past amongst the pain
    reveal your betrayal that love gave you

    You did a great job, keep writing and never give up.

    Take care,

    Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Willow

    5/5