Thats really good, so powerful, its very good, well done hun xxxx

Could have sworn I commented before.
Brillant poem, nice rhyming technique.
LOVE!

Believe me, this is no fable.

that was the line that dragged me into this. I loved it, very well done.

This one was so powerful and so filled with emotion. I love it. 5\5. Amazing!!

Wow
that was an amazing poem
I loved every bit of it
dont stop writing
your awesome
lol
xx