Wow i understand what you mean I can very well relate the same was with my father havent seen him in 6 years and im very happy nice poem it was truly descriptive and the flow was great 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Thats very well written, you have worded this well and it really flows very movingly. well done xxx

I really like this poem because it shows that there is hope when something bad happens in life

keep writing!
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