Someday ill find a lover

This poems is a good display of ur feelings, and brings forth a certain honest reality of the situation. this always was and still is my dream. the poem also ahs a good flow.

all i would say to improve it is to try to be less direct sometimes and throw afew metaphores and adjectives in to enfesize the point.

Everyone is hoping to find someone they can feel safe and can talk about everything. i hope you find that special person. i love it. from beginning to end. Great job!! =)
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy