Everyone is hoping to find someone they can feel safe and can talk about everything. i hope you find that special person. i love it. from beginning to end. Great job!! =)
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

This poems is a good display of ur feelings, and brings forth a certain honest reality of the situation. this always was and still is my dream. the poem also ahs a good flow.

all i would say to improve it is to try to be less direct sometimes and throw afew metaphores and adjectives in to enfesize the point.