This reminds me of a poem or song or something about taking pills. it's like...
"one pill, two pills, three pills, more, four pills, five pills, six pills, floor."

your poem is much more creative.
I liked it.
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Omgahh! i love the ending the ending it was really makes a poem and wow you hit it just right great poem in sad words!

This has been on my favorites list since forever and ive never commented... I Love This Poem its so beautiful and has helpd me through alot