:o. intense.
the imagery was very well described. .
this was. .really something.
And it really sux to have this happen. :[

but a great write nonetheless. 5/5.

The title is very unique, I don't what's that mean...
But this is very well written by you and it's very emotional. Well done job, you deserve 5/5!!!

Oh my god...
I hope this was just a story
I hate rapists and any one that would do this
is SICK!!
I hope if it's true your okay
I can't imagine going through this myself
this poem was excellent
a jaw dropper
and really an eye opener
wonderful job
5/5
kaila
take care

An insite in to how crul the world can be you wrote this well the imagery was very strong and the emotion ran very deep.

This is a wonderful poem, it gave me goosebumps to read it. I only hope it is not a true story.

Very descriptive, and the emotion is strong in this one, really sad and depressing, but a really well written piece

This poem is very sad but erotic and i like that keep it up

Whoa.. intense.. and strong images.. i gives you the feeling that your there in person.. what a sad poem... kinda makes a person speechless after reading it... nice written piece

-steven
-that single one

"My vision is blurred.
theres a bottle of jack daniels next to me."

Those lines were very imaginative and got my attention full throttle through the whole poem. 5/5

Any man like this should be killed, i hate poems like this, but other then that you used alot of emotion and imagination and with that it became a decent piece poetry, content aside you did some brilliant work 5/5

Oh my gosh...This is poem is really scarry and sad. I too have rape/abuse poems, but none have the raw truth. (talking about the language) I'm not saying it was bad but I could picture you crying telling someone this and that's what you would say. This poem is edgey and strong and I loved it happy writing
5/5

Wowww. um, this is terrible. it was so intense and filled with such imagery. ugh some people are perverts to even thinking about raping girls or anything like that. how disgusting. blahh. that's just wrong. anyway, a really intense poem and I could actually feel what this girl was going through and how she wanted nothing more than this guy to just back off but he wouldn't and he kept abusing her.. and wouldn't lsiten to her when she told him to stop. yikes. good write.. 5/5

So many images I got from reading this. You did very well writing it. I love the detail you put into it, the words you used, oh, so very powerful. Touching, heart wrenching, sad, angering, intense, so may words. I loved it.