Poem after a very long time & what a comeback.

Promises made left to die
Your life taken away
Facing mine in solitude
Wishing you had stayed

Beautiful start dear, loved the opening stanza spl. Keep writing dear, missed ur poems a lot.

all the best and take care

Sweet Cindy,

You have made a beautiful poem. I love your other poems very much too, the ones about nature and soldiers etc. But the ones about your late husband stand out because of the dedication they show towards him.

Love,

5/5 Ingrid

Hey, Cindy,
This was really good to read, quite sad though butyou really did a good job, the emotion was strong, the flow was aweosme and again it was just breathtakingly beautiful.
With love, Tara-Kay
p.s. Happy New Year!

Thats really deep feelings, keep it up xxx

Sad but tis very nicely written cindy, you truely have a gift with words, love the flow, you know i give it a perfect 5/5!

Very sad but great poem. I can relate to it.

It wuz sad but,
rlly good
i liked it keep
writing :]

A really heartfelt poem ,the pain is reflecting in each word. Glad to see you writing again.Im sure with time you will write more .

Every-night thoughts of you
Frozen in my mind
No longer knowing what is real
Stranded here in time

loved this stanza most.A really superb piece.

Love
chavii.

Another thrilling and very gripping poem. well done with your emotive and a touch of love to finish of this poem... excellent.

5/5 David

Dear Cindy,
again an emotional write.Your inner is reflected in minute details.5/5.I pray to the Almighty for your peace within.You are not lonely in this world.May 2008 bring you joy.Take care.Lots of love.

Hey Cinds, how you doing?

Glad to see u writing again!

I love this poem, all the emotion u portrayed through the words u used! well done!

even though this poem is sad, its such an honest poem! u really have a way with words!
well done!

have a lovely day, and a very happy and blessed new year!

Narc xxx

Very sad and telling write. more great stuff from you. 5/5 ben thompson

Oh cindy your poems evolving loss always stir up such an emotion in me these words truely come from a place within you that knows love like no other. well done xox sam