Wow...
I'm speechless... I really can't express how much I like this piece. This is the best poem in the life section I read in a while... so deep and endlessly complex. I like everything about this piece. Your wording is great and whole piece is excellently written. I admire whole idea for this poem, absolutely original and powerful. It kept my attention from the beginning to the end, creating amazingly vivid images in the mind. You have some truly excellent and intriguing descriptions and thoughts here.
I can't chose my favorite part because I would have to copy/paste the whole poem here...
It's truly hard to express how mind-blowing and effective this is. I am honestly impressed.
Brilliant, endlessly brilliant poem!

Keep writing!
5/5 from me, but you deserve much more :)