Just another girl...

by rachael   Dec 31, 2007


Rising from the ground
from brokenness, hurt
Pain and suffering
she is strong
Her eyes are fierce, with a passion;
burning desire
Heart on fire
none can penetrate
Let them just try
they come at her
They always will
but there she stays
Power and strength stand
torrents of shining water
Are blasted aside, apart
from the path, the very earth
Her gentle feet
choose to walk upon
Complete is the air she breathes
filled is her presence with an
incomparable aura of splendid beauty
grace, power, strength and courage.
just another girl...

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Wow that poem was really intense...i loved the strength bit...fierce...thats what I love reading about girls...because they arnt weak they are strong and revengful and you really captured that well.....you are good with words too, congratz that was awsum...
    btw thanks for ur comment that was a random poem i wrote i dont no why lol haha
    <3 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    This is amazing!! How you talk her up like she is them ost amazing hting like she has so many battles and shes feirce...then shes justanother girl like everyone faces ut...i love it!

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