Comments : I Chose

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A very interesting piece with some powerful statements about yourself. It seems like it's full of self-reflection. I liked it as a whole.

    I chose choices I didn't make

    That line didn't make much sense to me, but the rest of it was good!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Very indepth piece you've penned here. I like how you keep the structure of the first stanza and last stanza very similar with the three descriptive words in each line. The inbetween stanzas were well put too. And ending it with 'I chose to be me' was well done too...because it's like saying, good or bad, that's me and I'm the one that has to live with it. Not that we don't regret mistakes, but we also can't change them. Anyways, this was very well put. Good job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Dat's right. No one should change you lol. You are what you choose to be. I like that
    -vino

  • 13 years ago

    by Raven

    If I had your talent I would've written this first... exactly me.... Great job! Love Love Love your writing!