What is love

by Love is a Beautiful Thing   Dec 31, 2007


What is life without love,
What is love if you don't live life,
Its a chain of imperfection,
But yet, you still want it,
Because in your eyes it is perfect

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  • 15 years ago

    by isabel

    One-stanza poems seem to be a part of your writing style... :)

    You seem to be able to say everything in only a few words... It is a wonderful ability... I would suggest you to try to write a haiku, it seems like it would fit you perfectly...

    Your poem is astonishingly deep... Yet I ask myself why you end a question with a comma, instead of a question mark (sorry, i'm quite a perfectionist...)

    without any doubt a 5/5
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Even though this is short, it doesnt need to be long. and i am glad it isnt. it says ALL it needs to say about love in it.
    that is my belief on love, thank you for writing it!
    5/5

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