This is a brilliant poem i loved it

o nd take a look at my poems

the one about valentines dat you read is a sequel to 2 other poems in a valentine 3 poem series

Wow...
I'm speechless...
This is breathtaking and absolutely amazing, flawless and excellently written from the beginning to the end. Whole piece is endlessly original, filled with unique metaphors that truly impressed me and powerful decsriptions, untypical for classic love poetry (and that is one of the main reasons I admire your poems- I always end up impressed and speechless).
I can't express how much I like this.
Every stanza leaves superb, vivid images carved in mind.
Excellently done!