Who will hear you?

by Sarah   Jan 1, 2008


Her heart is filled with such misery
she cried. she cried.
no one knew
how she felt inside.

There one day
she escaped

she regretted it
until she was raped

Break. Break. Feel her pain
she had to leave
that is when
she slit her vein

Scream. Scream. No one could hear her
she knew she was dead
this time
for sure.

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  • 16 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautiful piece - the mood and tone are really set early in the poem, giving the audience something to base their first impression off of, and then it is carried on throughout the poem. The repetition (Scream. Scream./Break. Break.) is really noticable, and stands out appropriately in the text.

    Overall, absolutely lovely.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mikaella

    Wow this is amazing you should comment my poems

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Very powerful, i totally understand this, amazing job

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Excellent!- I=I really like this, its deep and so emotional keep it up...

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Really beautiful
    and i like the way you repeat words:
    "break. break", "she cried. she cried"
    it enphasizes how deep are feelings

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