Sadness eyes

by Sarah   Jan 1, 2008


She tried hard to fit in
but nothing worked.

She threw everything
but, then choked.

She climbed down her window
and watched the people play

She was sad.
she knew one day
she will fit in
and never break anything

She.She.She.
she's nobody
because she's me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!..really really sad...sorry 4 what ur going thru!

  • 16 years ago

    by eponine lovefool

    I agree with sarah sutton,i wrote a poem like this once but i never could get it right. this is what i was trying to say. beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara Sutton

    Aw this is beautiful.
    and you are somebody.
    i dont really know you
    but i know you write beautiful poetry
    That makes you special and unique
    and an important somebody=]
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Very touching words.

    She.She.She.
    she's nobody
    because she's me.

    in the end you cleard everything. i love the way you express the story in this poem.. great work welldone 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Everyone said it all this is an amazing poem.. great job 5/5