I really liked this one it was really good so good job love it

Very very good i love the feeling of this chill's down my spine.i love this keep up the great writing you are good at it:)

"Like the grief I am
Like the tears I'll be "

.. very hearfelt..

"With words and lust I can write
With the pain and illusions I can't define

Too many broken promises I've kept
Unwitting as I am of a future that could never be "
loved the lines..

beautiful poem... loved it

A wonderful poem 5/5

I love how your words are so clear-cut..no illusions to prop the poem.Excellent flow.Good write.

This is like pure lonliness and sadness and yet it's written beautifully. I hope you're alright sweetheart.
Very nicely written...
5/5