by BrixGoesxRawr Jan 1, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
That first kiss; true loves first kiss |
I love ur poem |
by Anonymous
That's one of the better poems I've read on this site. Originality, creativity, it was really good. I usually like poems that rhyme, but yours didn't need to, as it flowed well and was worded well. |
by Aimie
AWW! i love this so much, the entire time i was reading it , it reminded me of my boyfriend hehe |
I liked how you used symbolism for love, and I also liked the repitition. I think that you could have used a different title though, and thought up something that wasn't a line in the poem. Great work though. :) |
by moonlil
Great poem! |