by TheRapture03 Jan 2, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Just remember, that nothing is ever, what it seems |
It was a tad bit repetitive and I think the flow was a little off from over punctuation..overall it was a happy poem. I love poems about dreams, It could use a bit more imagery which could be obtained if you get rid of some of the repetitiveness. Still keep up the good work! |
I think this is a great poem. i agree with sarah that is my fav stanza! keep it up it was amazing :) |
by Nobodys Hero
Excellent job! |
by Sarah
This was so beautiful...i loved the flow.. |