Street of Dreams

by TheRapture03   Jan 2, 2008


Just remember, that nothing is ever, what it seems
When you walk the street of dreams
When you see me, sailing softly, to the sun
Just don't forget that you're the one

And so the sun sets, and so the day breaks
And then the mind is left wondering why
And so the night comes, and so the stars shine
Down the street of dreams, I know you are mine

And now you know, you've got to show, your true face
Time after time, you'll find this place
The street of dreams, the water's stream, runs through time
It never ends, but love is mine

And so the moonshine lights up the night sky
And then the mind reaches up so high
And so the night comes, and so the stars shine
Down the street of dreams, I know you are mine

Down the street of dreams, you'll find your way
The street of dreams, will you meet me there someday
Down the street of dreams, through the dawning day
The street of dreams, I'll never forget the way

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    It was a tad bit repetitive and I think the flow was a little off from over punctuation..overall it was a happy poem. I love poems about dreams, It could use a bit more imagery which could be obtained if you get rid of some of the repetitiveness. Still keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    I think this is a great poem. i agree with sarah that is my fav stanza! keep it up it was amazing :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Excellent job!
    You had a great rhyming flow 2!
    =]

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This was so beautiful...i loved the flow..

    Down the street of dreams, you'll find your way
    The street of dreams, will you meet me there someday
    Down the street of dreams, through the dawning day
    The street of dreams, I'll never forget the way

    That was my favorite stanza. Keep writing!

    -Sarah .