This was so beautiful...i loved the flow..

Down the street of dreams, you'll find your way
The street of dreams, will you meet me there someday
Down the street of dreams, through the dawning day
The street of dreams, I'll never forget the way

That was my favorite stanza. Keep writing!

-Sarah .

Excellent job!
You had a great rhyming flow 2!
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5/5

I think this is a great poem. i agree with sarah that is my fav stanza! keep it up it was amazing :)

It was a tad bit repetitive and I think the flow was a little off from over punctuation..overall it was a happy poem. I love poems about dreams, It could use a bit more imagery which could be obtained if you get rid of some of the repetitiveness. Still keep up the good work!