Comments : TO BE CONTINUED

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Been reading your poems. you write very well. keep it up . :)

  • 16 years ago

    by girlnextdoor

    What a beautiful way to tell a story through poetry, very nice job. Please continue this, it's very good and I'm quite curious.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I loved this one! very suspenseful. enjoyed it alott. keep up the nicee work!!