Realisation

by Tammie   Jan 2, 2008


I'm craving those words I wished you'd never say
And I'm missing everything in between and beyond
I said it would be okay, that I would be okay
Didn't I ever tell you I'd lie just so you'd respond?

But that all backfired on me now, nothings left
I should've known you'd steal everything I had
That you're guilty of the accusations of theft
'Cause my heart and happiness is broken and sad

You promised you'd come back for me,
That we'd stay friends until that day came.
Now I'm trying for you so desperately,
Wishing so much more than I'd claim

But wishes don't come true these days
And this tension is starting to build-up
Tonight I tried my one final way
Now I've realised I should just give up.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful
    I can really relate to this right now
    And I know a lot of other girls/boys can as well
    You made everything in this poem seem so real.
    Nothing in it seemed fake to me like a lot of love poems can be
    This poem really caught my attention
    flow was amazing
    vocab was as well
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Breathtaking, simply superb.
    I like your love poetry a lot, it is very original and refreshing. Whole poem has good flow and intense message. The feelings inside unfold in every line just to culminate inside of so powerful last line that represents excellent conclusion to the whole poem.
    This is very touching, truly heartfelt.
    The first stanza is my favorite.

    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Another good poem by you. Its fully of intense emotion. Very powerful words.

    My only problem though was the flow was a bit rocky. but still a really good poem

    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by Seth

    I like this poem. You and i have simmular styles as far as rhyming the second lines. its nice and it speaks its message. Keep up the good work.

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