I like this poem. You and i have simmular styles as far as rhyming the second lines. its nice and it speaks its message. Keep up the good work.

Another good poem by you. Its fully of intense emotion. Very powerful words.

My only problem though was the flow was a bit rocky. but still a really good poem

xx
Taegan Emily

Breathtaking, simply superb.
I like your love poetry a lot, it is very original and refreshing. Whole poem has good flow and intense message. The feelings inside unfold in every line just to culminate inside of so powerful last line that represents excellent conclusion to the whole poem.
This is very touching, truly heartfelt.
The first stanza is my favorite.

Keep writing!

Wonderful
I can really relate to this right now
And I know a lot of other girls/boys can as well
You made everything in this poem seem so real.
Nothing in it seemed fake to me like a lot of love poems can be
This poem really caught my attention
flow was amazing
vocab was as well
5/5
kaila