Resolution to My Life

by Michael D Nalley   Jan 2, 2008


The New Year may bring new hope
Even though I've been such a dope
How could I have been so blind?
To the true light, and not be kind.

Does not this earth follow a true and steady course?
Obeying laws without the need for any remorse?
If only my life was centered on the Light of the Son,
With celestial glory when all is said, and done.

I want to make a resolution to my wife
To follow the course to a better life
When heaven and earth becomes as one
All things can be made new under the sun

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This poem it good but not great.. i think that more emotion could have been expressed, also the rhymes are a bit overpowering to the poem and many seemed forced

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Thats was very sweet poem...i loved it..keep wrting..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww
    very lovely and enjoyable read
    this poem kept me smiling and
    it really kept me the reader
    hooked
    thanks for writing it
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Alright poem.The ryhmes seemed forced but the rest of it was good.Maybe you should just reword it a bit.Excellent topic.Not many new years poems this year.Some points were a little bit confusing but I think its because some of the sentances are oddly stuctured.A 4/5 for you efforts.
    Keep writing,
    Rado

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This is a really intersting poem...
    very sweet and hopeful...
    And i like how you use the new year's resolutions... it's a nice time for a change...
    nice poem =)
    *keep on*
    isabel

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