Comments : Resolution to My Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was really sweet! I liked the emotion behind it! The flow was a little off in some places, but your choice of words was great! Keep it up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This is a really intersting poem...
    very sweet and hopeful...
    And i like how you use the new year's resolutions... it's a nice time for a change...
    nice poem =)
    *keep on*
    isabel

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Alright poem.The ryhmes seemed forced but the rest of it was good.Maybe you should just reword it a bit.Excellent topic.Not many new years poems this year.Some points were a little bit confusing but I think its because some of the sentances are oddly stuctured.A 4/5 for you efforts.
    Keep writing,
    Rado

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww
    very lovely and enjoyable read
    this poem kept me smiling and
    it really kept me the reader
    hooked
    thanks for writing it
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Thats was very sweet poem...i loved it..keep wrting..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This poem it good but not great.. i think that more emotion could have been expressed, also the rhymes are a bit overpowering to the poem and many seemed forced