This was really sweet! I liked the emotion behind it! The flow was a little off in some places, but your choice of words was great! Keep it up :) |
by isabel
This is a really intersting poem... |
by Miranda
Alright poem.The ryhmes seemed forced but the rest of it was good.Maybe you should just reword it a bit.Excellent topic.Not many new years poems this year.Some points were a little bit confusing but I think its because some of the sentances are oddly stuctured.A 4/5 for you efforts. |
by Kaila
Awww |
by SweetSuicide
Thats was very sweet poem...i loved it..keep wrting..5/5 |
This poem it good but not great.. i think that more emotion could have been expressed, also the rhymes are a bit overpowering to the poem and many seemed forced |