Waiting for you; Michael </3

by xxTaegan Emilyxx   Jan 2, 2008


My tears don't take the pain away
& my screams don't stop the ache
my anger doesn't make me miss u less
& my smiles are only fake

my head plays the things u said
& all the lies u told
especially the one of eternity
& 2gether we'll grow old

every minute that goes by
i hurt a little more
after u said u loved me
u still walked out the door

although everyday I'm in pain
& my anger grows
there are things i need to say
that no one else knows

when we first kissed that night
lost in a sweet embrace
ill never forget 1 thing
the smile across your face

ill hold u close to my heart
the way love made us feel
i know u still love me
i know that it was real

one day i prey & i hope
ill see u smile again for me
because we were made for each other
we were meant to be

one day our paths will cross
so until then please miss me too
because Mick if i know anything
i know I'm in love with u

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hawaiizang3l

    THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT IM FEELING!! you took the words right out of my mouth!....this was really sweet; sad, but sweet! umm in the second to the last stanza i think you meant pray & not prey hehe :) but yes...very cute sad poem!! :)

    Keep it up --n-- Take care!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful poem
    the flow was good
    rhyme was good
    and the overall poem was
    well amazing
    you did a good job
    i loveed it
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I love the way this poem made me feel. It made me feel all warm and just left me with a smile. The descriptions you used were beautiful and the fact that you have hope is a really good thing because it doesnt let you dwell in saddness. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Paige Lea

    I really really like this one

    it's very thoughtful

    :)

    ~paige

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You did great job with rhymes, created truly flawless flow from the beginning to the end.
    Whole poem is very emotional and greatly written, heartfelt and touching.
    The only think I don't like is mentioning the name in the last stanza. I don't want to offend you, that's just my opinion, but I think that it would be better if you change it.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -my head plays the things u said
    & all the lies u told
    especially the one of eternity
    & 2gether we'll grow old-

    Keep up!

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