Comments : The Death of Love

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    What a beautiful yet sad poem. You had great friendship qualities and you're looking for the same in that special friend, then when you found out that he/ she is not what you'd expected and you're let down, It gives broken heart, yet you're ready if that person change there migh be a second chance. Sometimes take it from me, some people does not merits true friendship because they don't know what it is.
    Keep on writing, you'll get over it and also there are so many genuine people out there.

  • 12 years ago

    by Charlene Riner

    Very deep. Loved it. As i said before you have a true talent. I look forward to reading more of yours. Thank you for sharing.