Ok i loved youre poem. im not so sure about the last line"Either way someone will be there caring and loving" but the poem is very detailed it is short but u dont need a long poem for it to be a good one. uuh i llove the whole thing besides the last line rly but im gonna give u a 5\5 anyway. nice job!

I like this. nice job. 5\5. and thanks for the comments on my poems:)

Haha oops. comments 2wice o well.