Dove

by thememorythathurts   Jan 2, 2008


I gave you my hart. i spent
all of my time with you.
you were my soul, my will
to live, my strength.
but when i saw you with him.
you on his lap. you lost my soul.
my will to live is now gone. my strength
was so weak i couldn't even crawl.
all of my time gone to wast.
my dad came home late to
see me hanging from the tree.
he ran to me and cut me down
with his pocket knife but it was to
late. i left a note on my dresser
that said
put a white dove no my grave
so that every one will know
that i died for love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Love really does kill us slowly, as much as we wanna say it makes us live. beautiful poem, you caught it. go back and fine tune it tho! it's got some spellin errors that are kinda distractin... <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Cool poem. but sad. ya got some spelling errors too, but its alright.

  • 16 years ago

    by xXBleedxBlackXx

    Wow so much pain in that poem that come from love i love it lmao

  • 16 years ago

    by Maxi Mutilation

    Hey sweety, nice work. very relatable, LOVE IT

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamGirl

    Hey that was a poem.......... umm.. keep it up!!

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