Its kinda weird, but good. i like it at first how its like a call and response. then it changes, but hey. the words are chosen so well

Beautifully written u are truly talented me. you made me pause, daze, dream, and invision your words from the very first line. You are truly talented keep up the writing. And if I may offer my advice walk away baby girl its not worth it if their is no certainty and no committment on his part because it is unbalanced and will only lead to heartbreak. I been there I know from experience. It may sting for awhile but it will fade away. Don't settle find better.