This tis a very good poem terra, perfect grammer, flawless, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Oh My absolutly LOVED IT 5/5

This poem is wonderful and meaningful. It teaches us that sometimes you have to wait ad it'll all be worth it in the end. This girl didnt have the perfect fairytale where she meats her prince and they lived happy ever after from that day, she had to say good-bye to him the same night, it hurt her that they were drifting apart, she waited for so long to talk to him.. and yet when she had lost all hope, and though that her love has dies.. she meets him again and he sweeps her off her feet.
I LOVED IT =)
take care x

*thought
*died

I loved it
great poem
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5/5

Omg, wow! Amazing, beautiful stunning, I don't think there are enough words to describe how perfect I thought this poem was! It captured my heart, I fell deeply in love with it. Every single line was well thought out and the ending just made the entire poem together perfectly. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

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Kinda cliche title, but it did catch my eye...

That whole interpretation was before I started reading and your first line caught my attention and continued throughout the whole stanza.

But every fairy tale has a happy ending,
So she kept her heart open, kept on singing.

Those two stanzas give off a wonderful sense of hope and the analogy of singing throughout the first two stanzas were beautiful..
One thing though, for me your flow seems kind of off. I am not an expert on flow so it might just be me before you get the wrong idea. Lol

Okay, third stanza... I like your use of punctuation it always adds extra spice in the peice. Lol. && the stanza overall is sad it's like a rollercoaster. One minute your up and happy next minute it's gone. I am not sure if thats a good comparison so hopefully you understand what I am saying..

But like everything else, they slowly drifted apart.
She would stay online for hours, hoping to see his name,
But day by day, the song in her heart fades away.

Oh how I can relate to those lines. They are heartbreaking and hold such a sad meaning. The first line was a great beginning for the stanza..

Oh boy..

Within the power of a deep red rose he stole her heart;
And with a kiss he sealed her torn thoughts.

those lines right there are amazing. I love them. Aghhh. They are just so beautiful. I didn't quite like the last line it just didn't click for me. Although it did relate back to the title. Overall, a beautifully written peice. Great job.

Amber.