A very nice flow in this poem that expresses so well a disapointment in love, or at least a lover

Very good!!
it had a niice flow to it and the little ryming in it made the poem even better!!! keep up the great work!!

<3 i love you silly

A beautifully written poem.
so much emotion was captured.
adn you're choice of words were great
and the flow was flawless.
great write. 5/5.

Wow.
Very Good...
Flowed Really Nice..
Great Job!! =]]
I Loved It