Hot and Rainy Day 12/05/07

by DreamGirl   Jan 2, 2008


Outside my window its really hot,
the wind is blowing still in my spot,
please cool down enough to play,
the sun is shining in my way,
suddenly a cloud strikes its path,
I run outside to take a bath,
muddy yard and muddy streets,
I dive into the puddles to have some fun,
my brother Byron runs out of the house with a gun,
I jumped and hopped,
and quickly said stop,
Too late the gun had already shot!!
poor me they suddenly see,
they shot me all in regret.

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  • 16 years ago

    by DreamGirl

    What do you think I should add 2 it...

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ok i like this one too. but you need to keep going a line or two. people can guess what ur brother does with the gun but i think you should put it down. if u had continued id give u a 5\5 but im going to give u a 4\5