I don't even know you

by Kaila   Jan 2, 2008


It's impossible to love you from not even knowing who you are,
Stupid to dream about you day and night wondering if you see me,
Scarred to take that final step to tell you how I really feel,
Frustrated how much I care and you don't even know.

Horror stuck to even think about you loving someone else,
Crazy to believe that I would be that special one for you,
Immature the way I giggle when you come near me,
Depressed daydreaming of your vibrant smile.

Haunting are the way your eyes stare into my soul,
Hoping that you can really see how I feel deep inside,
Sobbing thinking about how stupid I sound,
Enraged when I'm told to give up this obsession.

Terrified of what you will think when you know,
Hopeful that you will smile and kiss me then,
Knowing this could never happen to me,
Empty when you smile and walk on by.

Praying that there is a miracle that you will come to me,
Joyful daydreaming when you will kiss me in the stars,
Blissful happiness consumes when you look at me now,
Loving but who could really fall in love when I don't even know you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    That was so true feelings... actually its really impossible to love some if u dont even know him/her yet obviously..hmm i understand all the words that u had wrote in here coz honestly i was love someone i dont even know him well yet! so i guess same situation for me at the same time! i love how u express ur emotions here the message was truly inspires me a lot. it was totally great piece of love! coz u just expressed all how u feel in this someone then.. i enjoyed reading it and i can relate as well.. marvelous job keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    You portrayed the emotion's and message vividly. It flowed well, and was a nice length for the content. The word choice was strong, and it added to the peice.

    Well done,
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    I don't care if this poem didn't rhyme or doesn't have a flow.. a poem doesn't need to have that.. the important thing is the message or story behind it.. this is so great.. i've never read a non-rhyming poem that's really nice to read.. keep it up! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    So sad. But beautifully written. I love the emotion expressed in this poem. The wording was great and flow perfect. Just some spelling mistakes but otherwise perfect
    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Wow righteous work you got there. i really liked the original idea of putting the emotion at the beginning of each line. nicely done 5/5

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