Ahh hun this was sooo beautiful! I loved how the first word in each stanza was a emotion describing how you feel. It was exactly how I felt about my lastest crush. It kills you inside having all this love but him not even having a clue. *sigh* Beautiful poem hun, I am favoriting it. *5/5*

This is another great poem!!! u always seem to amaze me with your talent!!!! Keep it up!

Amazing flow and great choice of words in this free verse poem

Really well written piece, loved the word choice, really kept me reading, well done

It is very well written poem...
Very well worded and I really enjoyed the content...
The title is not really interesting but I really love the content...
Anyway 5/5 job!!!

Wow.. i love this poem i am a HUGE fan of non-rhyming poems it always adds to the emotion and really helps empower the words... this poem fits that perfectly... your emotions are strong nad portrayed nicely..

an enjoyable read :]

and i love the last line.

Wow righteous work you got there. i really liked the original idea of putting the emotion at the beginning of each line. nicely done 5/5

So sad. But beautifully written. I love the emotion expressed in this poem. The wording was great and flow perfect. Just some spelling mistakes but otherwise perfect
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Taegan Emily

I don't care if this poem didn't rhyme or doesn't have a flow.. a poem doesn't need to have that.. the important thing is the message or story behind it.. this is so great.. i've never read a non-rhyming poem that's really nice to read.. keep it up! =]

You portrayed the emotion's and message vividly. It flowed well, and was a nice length for the content. The word choice was strong, and it added to the peice.

Well done,
5/5

That was so true feelings... actually its really impossible to love some if u dont even know him/her yet obviously..hmm i understand all the words that u had wrote in here coz honestly i was love someone i dont even know him well yet! so i guess same situation for me at the same time! i love how u express ur emotions here the message was truly inspires me a lot. it was totally great piece of love! coz u just expressed all how u feel in this someone then.. i enjoyed reading it and i can relate as well.. marvelous job keep it up 5/5